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Speeding down a deserted highway, late at night, at the very limit of my control; look in the rear-view. Fumble with the phone, auto-dial, wait in vain for an answer. Come on!
Try to control my breathing. Look in rear-view, again…
Headlights.
My heart was racing as I read this. I so want to know what happens next.
Thanks! :-)
I also got a racing heart when I read this. Wonderful job creating such a dramatic scene with so few words. Well done!!
Thank you :-)
You have created great suspense here.
Thanks very much! :-)
A great take on the prompt. Loved the suspense you created.
Thank you for reading and commenting! :-)
Good one! I am on the edge of my chair... :-)
Don't fall off! ;-)
I'm wondering now, Headlights Police or Headlights ....disaster.
I'm reminded of the 'headlights' in Close Encounters... that weren't even really headlights.
Eeek!! I can only hope "they" is something good instead of where my imagination wants to go.
Somehow I really doubt 'they' are girl scouts with cookies... ;-)
Awesome bit of writing filled with excitement and suspense! ♥
Welcome to the gargleblaster, David, and to yeah write! We're excited to have you on board. Nice action packed little story here. :)
Thanks very much :-)
Very visual!
And you -- objects in the rear-mirror are closer than they appear... wooee
...and range is closing. dun dun DUN....
Drive faster! Liked this, David.
I wouldn't be checking my phone, I'd be getting the phark out of there! Great adrenaline injection, David!
My heart was racing as I read this. I so want to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteThanks! :-)
DeleteI also got a racing heart when I read this. Wonderful job creating such a dramatic scene with so few words. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteYou have created great suspense here.
ReplyDeleteThanks very much! :-)
DeleteA great take on the prompt. Loved the suspense you created.
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading and commenting! :-)
DeleteGood one! I am on the edge of my chair... :-)
ReplyDeleteDon't fall off! ;-)
DeleteI'm wondering now, Headlights Police or Headlights ....disaster.
ReplyDeleteI'm reminded of the 'headlights' in Close Encounters... that weren't even really headlights.
DeleteEeek!! I can only hope "they" is something good instead of where my imagination wants to go.
ReplyDeleteSomehow I really doubt 'they' are girl scouts with cookies... ;-)
DeleteAwesome bit of writing filled with excitement and suspense! ♥
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the gargleblaster, David, and to yeah write! We're excited to have you on board. Nice action packed little story here. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks very much :-)
DeleteVery visual!
ReplyDeleteAnd you -- objects in the rear-mirror are closer than they appear... wooee
ReplyDelete...and range is closing. dun dun DUN....
DeleteDrive faster! Liked this, David.
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't be checking my phone, I'd be getting the phark out of there! Great adrenaline injection, David!
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading and commenting! :-)
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