"I don't like this one."
"What?" It was three girls in identical bathing caps, wrapped in identical towels, going into a nondescript changing enclosure. "Why?"
"They're not happy."
"What makes you think they're not happy?"
"Well, look at them." Exasperation crept into her voice. "Look at the expression on the youngest one's face. She's not happy. And there's no door on the changing room. People will see."
"I don't think—"
"And where's the ocean? They're supposed to be at the beach but you can't see it. What if there's no beach, and no ocean? What if that's why they're mad?"
good one- I took a slightly different turn on my interpretation! Cheers !
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DeleteIntriguing approach to the prompt's meaning. Well done.
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DeletePretend reality has a lot to answer for. Love this dialogue.
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DeleteLove your story! ... where's the beach!
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DeleteIt could be anything that causes their anger - perception is projection! Interesting response :)
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DeleteGood one.. nice interpretation
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DeleteRequired ~~ doors on changing rooms!
ReplyDeleteYeah that's pretty much a given. :)
DeleteGood one! Quite a distinct response.
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